Comic 10 - Just slaying things
20th Feb 2011, 8:22 PM in Flying dreams
Just slaying things
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Author Notes:
Glimeron edit delete
not as wonderful as I wanted it to be.
User comments:
Neneirreth (Guest) edit delete
You perfectionist. It's fine.

So this is Tali?
Anon (Guest) edit delete
Only thing I'd edit is the placement of some of the speech bubbles. Generally, the bubbles go top-bottom in height, based on which comes sooner (the sooner ones are higher than later ones) so the part where Tali introduces herself is kinda confusing, but common logic makes up for it. In the future, though, it can make it easier to read.